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                              Bella, it's time......  Chapter 1

    I woke up, she blinked a couple times trying to clear my vision. I lay on a soft, big bed. I pushed the covers aside and turned to sit up.
    "Good morning, Bella," he breathed in my ear.
    I turned only to gaze into his liquid topaz eyes. I remembered to breathe. Edward looked at me with that crooked smile I loved so much. He looked away and brushed his beautiful bronze hair out of his eyes.
    "You know Bella it is polite to say good morning back," he said annoyed.
    "Good morning Edward," I said, smiling.
    I stood up and looked around the room. The black leather sofa in the middle of the room, and the stack of Cd's neatly arranged confirmed I was in Edward's room. I stumbled up, Edward was at my side helping me balance. I stood up straight and he let me go still keeping a cautious eye on me. I walked a few steps to reassure him I was okay now, but ended up tripping on my own feet. Edward already was ready to catch me and I landed in his hands, looking up at his smirk. I scowled.
     "Bella, it's still morning and already your in danger.. from yourself," he chuckled.
     I got up and put me hands on my hips. I pouted but it quickly dissapeared when I looked in his lucious gold eyes. I looked away, and took a breath when I realized I hab been holding my breath.
     "What's wrong Bella?" Edward asked, turning my around to look at him.
     "Nothing," I said pulling away from him.
     "Ok, tell me what are you thinking," he asked his carmal gold eyes dazzled me.
     "I was thinking when you were going to change me now that we are married and you fullfilled my request," I breathed.
     Edward frowned and looked at the door. He was always dissapointed when I brought the subject up.
     "How about now?" he said.
     "Really?" I asked, hope in voice.
     Edward grabbed me in a hug. He went along my jaw line to my neck. I felt his mouth open. My heart started beating faster than I have ever heard it go. Edward kissed my neck then bared his teeth again.
     "Are you sure Bella?" I knew he only asked in case I changed my mind.
     "Yes," I breathed.
     Edward inched closer. I felt his teeth a centimeter away from my neck. I was ready to endure the pain leading to my new vampire life. I closed my eyes waiting for the fire in my veins to take place once Edward bit me. I waited to start my new life with Edward, forever.
I was inspired by gaarafan6690 to start my own. I love Twilight and I tried to capture the moment that Edward would bite Bella.

Edward Cullen, Bella Swan belong to Stephanie Meyer

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Parasite-Positive Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009   Writer
What amazes me is that the fan fiction is better than the actual book.
LadyDraxx2520 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Interface Designer
I agree.
vampiress-of-death Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE!!!!!! I DEMAND IT. no i am kidding. but it would be awesome if there was more
Brighttalon Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
have you read all 18 chapters?
vampiress-of-death Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
no ive only seen one. so ill look dont worry ill read them
abluvsbenny Featured By Owner May 11, 2009
did u have to stop? its really good write more please
naruhina25 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2009
luv this! if only this was how it REALLY happened
poppunklove173 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009
0.o~ Addicting- awesome opening chapter.
RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009   Writer
That sounds just like something Stephenie Meyer would write. I love it!:love:
Brighttalon Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
thank you, I hopeI see more comments from you in the future^^
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